Horror Movies Forum - Animal - short story #4

Re: Animal - short story #4

dummy@example.com (swollenguy) — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 02:58:33 +0000

I thought it was great.

Re: Animal - short story #4

dummy@example.com (The Creature) — Sun, 18 Apr 2010 01:20:32 +0000

Dude, that's awesome!

Very well written my friend. Very entertaining and suspensful too. Really liked it. You should write a novel if you haven't already.

Re: Animal - short story #4

dummy@example.com (Chrizzy) — Sat, 17 Apr 2010 20:36:43 +0000

Well, I'm always happy to get...um...one response lol
Merci

Re: Animal - short story #4

dummy@example.com (wolfman1959) — Sat, 17 Apr 2010 15:12:58 +0000

excellent chrizzy! got my attention from the start and held it, and that's all you can ask, well done!

Animal - short story #4

dummy@example.com (Chrizzy) — Sat, 17 Apr 2010 15:00:58 +0000

I just finished this, so it's hot off the presses, as they say. Of course, that also means I haven't had a chance to read over it yet, so it's still kinda rough around the edges, but, sometimes, having other people read things over is more helpful, so...here she is.
It was inspired by a dream I had the other night. I call it... *cue the creepy Shutter Island-esque score* ...ANIMAL. Tell me what you think as always, any comment/criticism at all is appreciated.

http://www.scribd.com/doc/30074283/Animal