The Theme Park of Terror (Part Eight/Final Part)

.....Mikki is now hanging upside down, a thick rope is tied around a piece of wood above her, which makes Mikki hang upside, from her legs. The employee, is walking around Mikki, looking at her screaming for help, Mikki can see Jackie, lying on the floor fully naked, a badly burised head. Mikki trys talking to the employee, "Please, please don't hurt me, I'll do anything. Don't hurt Jackie either please, we'll both do anything and everything you want, just don't kill us, please".
The employee, starts laughing at Mikki, and then says "What would you do, instead of me slicing you up, and feeding your body parts to the Cannibals, huh?". Mikki trying not to cry says, "Anything please, we'll both have sex with you if you want, at the same time, or one after the other. Or we can both have sex, and you can watch us, whatever you want, just don't kill us please". The employee laughs even more now, but it's not a good laugh, his laugh sounds very evil, as if he knows what he is doing. The employee replies, "Okay, we'll have sex, one after the other, but first, we're having some real dirty fun".
Mikki looking on as the employee walks a desk in the back, but she can't see what's on the desk as it gets dark down near the back, but as the employee walks back up, she notices he has a whip, and a knife. Mikki starts panicking, and crying, the employee lies down his knife, and whip, and starts undressing Mikki as she is hanging upside down. A few minutes pass, and Mikki is fully undressed, and still hanging upside down, and Jackie shows no sign of waking up soon.
The employee picks up his whip, and starts whipping Mikki furiously, over and over, harder and harder, whipping her everywhere on her body. Mikki now in dreadfull pain from being whip for over 5 minutes straight, and marks all over her body, he drops the whip to the blood stained floor. He then picks up the knife, and starts cutting Mikki, from her stomach area, to her legs. The employee cuts nearly everywhere, but Mikki somehow still alive from all this punishment, the employee stops, as he sees Jackie starting to slowly move on the floor. The employee runs over to Jackie as she trys to stand up, not knowing whats going on, the employee punches Jackie as hard as he can in her head. And then lifts her on her feet, Jackie not understanding whats going on, starts crying and says "What's happening, let me go!" and then Mikki says, "Jackie! If you let him do whatever he wants, he'll let us go and not kill us, please let him do whatever he wants!". As Jackie hears Mikki's voice, she looks at Jackie and is in shock to see how badly damaged Mikki is, blood pouring from her, cuts and whip marks all over her body. The employee says, "Get down on the floor now!", Jackie gets on the floor, and the employee rapes her, as Mikki is made watch this, hanging upside down in a bloody mess. After the employee is done raping Jackie, he drags her over to a beam of wood near the wall, and ties to her to it, using another piece of rope.
"I want her tied down, while I have some fun with you now", says the employee, he unties Mikki, and she drops to the floor. Mikki in such a bad way, not being even able to move properly from all that has happened to her, doesn't even try to do anything, and obeys what is going to happen. The employee pushes Mikki down, face first to the floor, and then rapes her, over and over as Jackie is made watch, the employee rapes Mikki a shockingly 5 times. Mikki now lying on the floor facing Jackie, nearly lifeless, the employee picks up the knife on the floor, and points to Jackie, and walks towards to her. Mikki thinking that the employee is going to torture her like he did to her, but she's wrong. The employee slowly walks to Jackie, as she is screaming and crying, the employee shoves the knife through Jackie's forehead, the knife is embedded into her head, and the employee walks back towards the table in the back, for something else.
Mikki starts screaming with fear, now knowing the employee isn't sticking towards his side of the deal, as the employee is getting something from the back of the room, Mikki can see the end of the staircase from where she lies on the floor. Suddenly, a bang is heard from upstairs near the basement door, and body falls down the stairs at a high pace, which means it the person couldn't of fell. As the body reaches the end of the staircase, Mikki notices that it's James who is lying on the floor, with his eyes ripped out of his skull, and engraved on his head is, "Dead" and blood flowing from the engravement on his head, which most of been with a knife.
Mikki now screams even louder, knowing that she will possibly die in the basement of this ride. The employee starts walking back from the table with something in his hand, and walks straight up to Mikki, as she is lying on the floor, the employee says, "Here it is, the final part, if you surive this, you're allowed leave". Mikki now a bit more at ease, replies "Really? Okay, lets just get this over with, what is it?", Mikki asks as she can't see whats in the employees hand, as he has it hid behind his back.
"It's this..." says the employee, and shows a handgun, which's a 9mm handgun. Mikki bursts out crying as soon as she sees the handgun, and the employee says, "But from what I know, not many people survive gun shots to the head, and the people that do, are only liars", the employee lifts the handgun, and points it straight at Mikki's head, and pulls the trigger, and shoots straight into her forehead, Mikki dies instantly.
On the other side of things, Jessica and Joey finally make their way to the Raining Blood Rollercoaster, they arrive at the entrance to it, and it's a massive building, and on the front door, says "Only people who're told, please enter, any guests who enter who have not been invited, shall be punished". Joey and Jessica both look at each other, and enter the building, which is designed very poorly on the outside. As soon as they enter, the building is very dark, and has little light. But both friends follow the line, which is leads to the Rollercoaster, as both friends are walking there way in the direction the line gives them, they start to hear a Rollercoaster. They continue to walk in the direction, as they reach the top of the line, the room that you get on the Rollercoaster, they notice a small sign that says, "Nearest exit, to the left, end of hallway". Both Joey and Jessica jump with happiness, releasing that they are the ones that got the Exit door, they look to the left, and notice the door. They open the door, and infront of them is a hallway, with a door at the end saying "Exit" on it, they run towards the door. They reach the door, and go to open it, the pull the handle, and realise...they need the key that Mikki was carrying to open the door, the shock and dissapointment appears on both there faces. Joey says, "We'll go to where Mikki is, and get the key from her, and we can all escape together, come on lets go", as Joey says this, they turn around, and notice a man standing in the door they entered, and the man says "Sorry, this is the end of the line", as the man with the Clown costume says this, He pulls a handgun from his pocket, both Joey and Jessica standing in shock, scared to say anything, the masked man points the gun at Joey, and shoots him straight in the head. Jessica screams with terror, and looks at Joey lying on the floor, the man then says "Now your turn", and shoots Jessica aswell, she dies instantly. The man walks up to the bodies of Joey and Jessica, and says "Anyone who enters, never leaves, it's our policy".....

So there it is, the Final Part of my story, the ending sucks but hey, that's how it ends. It's a long Part, but it's the Final Part, and since I didn't put up a Part for a while, this Part was long, and hopefully somewhat entertaining. I didn't like the ending, and this isn't my best work, so don't judge me so fast. I might put up another story of mine here, IF people will read it, but I'll have more on that in a few days.

Anyway, leave your comments here, if you have any about this story or such, and Thank you to all of those who have read, and hopefully enjoyed.

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                                            The Theme Park of Terror (Part Seven)

.....The friends hear the person walking around upstairs, and they instantly start panicing. Chris whispers, "What are we going to do? That guy is going to come down here and hack us up to fucking pieces, and when it comes to it, It won't be me dying". The shock appears on Mikki's and Jackies face, Mikki replies whispers "We need to spilt up here, and walk around to try find an exit, this house seems huge, Chris you go upstairs and look, Jackie you go down to the Basement, I'm sure there will be one. And I'll search this floor, if you find an exit, come back and get the rest of us".
Both Chris and Jackie agree to this, but Chris starts getting more nervous, "I have to go upstairs with that fucking psycho there? I'll be murdered, what am I suppose to do?", Mikki replies, "You hide from the psycho then, just hide until he moves on, we need to get out of here before we all die, or hope that Joey and Jessica get an exit, lets just move now". The friends split up for different floors then, Jessica walks around to the back of the House, through the Sitting Room, and then the Kitchen, and then finding the basement door. She opens it, and starts walking down the creeky stairs, each step making more noise than the other. Jackie finally reaches the last step of the basement steps, and from the view she has, she can't see anything that's out of the ordinary. She hears some sort of object falling over, and making noise. Jackie gets scared straight away, and looks down in the direction that she hears the noise coming from.
She sees a empty tin can rolling out from the darkness of the corner and just stops in the middle of the floor, Jackie sees this, and starts to walk down to the back of the basement slowly, incase of a door would back there, hidden in the darkness. As she gets further down into the back of the basement, with more junk, all around the basement....but then suddenly a man lunges from behind a crate. Jackie doesn't get a good look at the man, only seeing a figure of a man that is jumping at her. The man lunges at Jackie, and brings her to the ground, the impact of Jackies head bouncing off the ground, knocks her compeletly out, she's unconscious.
Upstairs on the ground level, Mikki is searching for an exit, and finds a door in the kitchen, and trys to open it, but it's locked shut, and won't budge open at all. Mikki searches the rest of her ground level, and finds nothing that could be an exit, not giving a second thought to going upstairs to where Chris went, as she knows another person is up there with him, possibly a killer. Mikki finds the basement door, that Jackie went used to enter the basement, the door is not shut, and is fully open showing that she went down there. As Mikki walks her way to the bottom of the basement staircase, she looks down towards the back of the basement, to find Jackie on the floor, fully naked, and seeming to be knocked out, as she can't see any blood.
Mikki rushes down towards the body of Jackie, but as she is running down, she doesn't notice a trap is laid for her, and a piece of rope pulls her up into the air, and she is stuck upside down in the air held on by a piece of rope, a man emurges from the darkness, and says in a rough voice, "Now, the ride offically starts bitch"......

There you go, there's Part Seven, I'll have Part Eight up tomorrow, as usual!

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                                            The Theme Park of Terror (Part Six)

....then a "click" is heard on the Intercom, and the voice disappears. There is complete silence, among the group of friends, no one saying anything, until Chris starts speaking. "Okay okay, that guy was just messing around with us, he probably wants to scare us, that's why we're here". Mikki replies in an angry tone, "How the fuck was he messing with us? He was being serious, and if don't get out of here now, we're going to be like..." and then looks at Carla. Joey now has an input on the situation, "Well, what're we going to do? It's only like 11:30pm and we're not allowed to leave for ages, we're going to fucking die here, and it's all your fault Mikki, you cunt!".
Jackie sticks up for Mikki though, "It's not her fault, it's everyones fault, we all agreed to come here, Mikki only suggested it to us, we're at fault here too". Jessica replys, while trying to stop crying, "What are we going to do now then? That guy obviously is keeping an eye out for us, so we have to get out of here somehow". Mikki thinks of an idea, and shares it with the group, "There must be a way out for employees down at the back of the park, and I've this employee key, so it could open up other doors. But I think we're better off spliting into 2 groups, whoever gets out first, goes and gets help. Everyone agree?". Chris, "Good idea, I'll go with Mikki and Jackie, and Joey you go with Jessica. We'll each try to find a way out, and one of us must find one, at all costs".
Joey thinking this is a good idea, goes along with it, "Yeah that sounds good, lets go now, and try get out of here as soon as possible, I don't want to stay in here much longer". The group then splits into two separate groups, and get ready to leave the employee Toilets, until a voice over the Intercom is heard again;

"Aww that's a shame your separating into smaller groups, I wanted everyone to stay together, so you all could watch each other die! Now, I'm going to make this a fun game. There's one other exit to this Park, I'll tell you it. But there's always a catch, I'm going to give yous another location in the Park, and whatever group goes to whatever location is either going to find a exit, or a lovely bunch of employees who will have killing to do. There's two locations as I said, one being The House of Murders, and the other location being the Raining Blood Rollercoaster. Oh and one other thing, don't try to wait till the Frontgates open, cause they'll be unlike Carlas legs, not open the whole time", the voice bursts into laughter, and another "click" is heard, and the voice is gone.

Mikki starts talking, "Em okay so, this is where we've to choose who goes where...we're going through with this, and whatever group gets the exit, will leave and call the police and get them to come here and save the rest. Me, Chris, and Jackie will go to The House of Murders, and you and Jessica go to the Raining Blood Rollercoaster, and one of us will find the exit". Jackie replies, now really angry, "What if neither of the stupid fucking rides have the exit then what? We both die?", Chris sticks up for Mikki, "Well, it's a chance we have to take, and if we surive this, imagine how much people in School will want to be friends with us, we'll be wanted AND famous, so awesome". Mikki replies, "Ugh, lets just go, we'll be wishing for you Joey and Jessica, hopefully one of us get out".
The group separates, Mikki, Jackie, and Chris head for The House of Murders, and Joey and Jessica head for the Raining Blood Rollercoaster. Mikki, Jackie and Chris are walking to The House of Murders, but not engaging in much converstion with each other, they're more nervous and scared of what could happen than anything, while they walk to The House of Murders, all they keep hearing is sounds of Rollercoasters and screams from people, and people talking. They keep walking and finally reach, The House of Murders, across the entrance to the ride says "Closed for Maintenance, please come back at a later time". Mikki, Jackie, and Chris walk up to the entrance, and Mikki uses the employees key to open the door, and the door opens. The friends walk in, and no sound is heard, everywhere is nearly pitch dark, but visible. They walk in, and see a set of stairs ahead of them, but also a sitting room to the right of the entrance, and blood is all over the floor.
A voice is heard then, on the Intercom, "Welcome, you can search the house for the exit and try escape, but remember be quiet, cause you don't want to wake up the employees up stairs who sleep there, they'll be more mad than ever", says the man on the Intercom. The friends walk into the sitting, only to notice a body on the floor, but with no skin and blood mainly covering the whole area, Jackie lets out a horrible big scream straight away, Mikki and Chris say together "shhhhh!", they all turn quiet, while Jackie trys not to voimt, then they hear somebody walking around upstairs.....

Okay that's Part Six of the story, and since nothing much happened in this Part, I promise I shall add Part Seven later on TODAY! Stay tuned.

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