Horror Movies Forum - A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 03:39:56 +0000

^^ Oh....

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (azathoth) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 03:02:57 +0000

^^
I'm hoping Tripod was joking about the rape thing.
Sam and Dean are the main characters from the TV show "Supernatural," so you could be look at copyright infringement and/or confusing the reader.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 02:40:15 +0000

With rape and no Sam or Dean!?

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (Tripod) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 02:01:03 +0000

Also end it with rape. It helps with the story/plot.

This is real feedback

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (azathoth) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 01:56:32 +0000

^^
Just as long you don't have characters named Sam or Dean in it.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 01:55:02 +0000

I think dubbing this story the name "Supernatural" would be alright guys?

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Sat, 10 Nov 2012 01:01:48 +0000

I had a dream just then that I was forced to write ANOTHER story. Must be to excited that it was my first horror story.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (azathoth) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 23:50:24 +0000

A Lost Boy wrote:

^^ Doesn't understand most words except for the basic words and "monkey">

That's what happens when I start making things up, .

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (Underdog) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 23:50:10 +0000

Nice job and thanks for sharing.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (Tripod) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 23:34:24 +0000

I thought it was a fun read. Good story.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 23:28:00 +0000

^^ Doesn't understand most words except for the basic words and "monkey">

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (azathoth) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 16:14:02 +0000

^^
It was a good enough translation that I understood what was going on. It wasn't like you wrote "And the monkey oils flatulence besmirch the Ozmonium works with a confluence of aardvark feathers."
(Hmm, I gonna steal that last line for my next spammer beat down.)

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 15:55:56 +0000

^^ And that was my translation.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (azathoth) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 15:51:52 +0000

^^
Don't forget you are about 10 hours ahead of most of the members here, time wise.

For 2 hours, darn good. Every writer I know, including myself, goes through about 3 revisions before they even get remotely happy with what they wrote. So, nice work.

Re: A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

dummy@example.com (A Lost Boy) — Fri, 09 Nov 2012 15:07:20 +0000

^^ For me it seems like a Poltergeist Evil Dead-ish rip-off