Topic: This Man's Mind, a new story from MutilatedExplosion and myself!
As some of you are aware that I post the stories I write myself on here to read, and from what I know the people that read them like them. So, me and a friend of mine came up with the idea of doing a story together, he is on this site but only new. The way this is going to work is, me and him are doing the story in Parts. He took the first part and made up the entire Plotline and Characters, so that all goes to him, not me. You will know his Part from my Part because whenever a Part is posted it will say beside it who's Part it is. And when he is done his Part, I'll take over for a Part and determine what happens next. Okay, so everyone understand now? Yes? Okay, that's good
So we have the first Part of the story here, which my friend MutilatedExplosion has done. Then in a day or two, I'll post up my own Part that I took over from where he has left off for me, and then I'll post my Part and he takes over, and so on until the story ends.
Quick summary of the story;
This story is set in the Present World (2011), and is based around the life of a man who has these 'Visions' and sorts of things. But he doesn't know the difference between the Visions and actual real life.
'This Man's Mind' (Part One - MutilatedExplosion's Part)
It was just like any other ordinary day for Mr Frank Hobbs, he got up, got his breakfast and then said goodbye to his family before he left to drive to work. Frank works as a car sales man, a long way from his home. Everything was going well as usual just like any other normal day, that is until he heard loud nosies and shouts coming from his boss's office. As Frank was approaching his boss's office, two men who looked very angry burst out and marched over to Frank. "Are you a Mr. Frank. A .Hobbs" asked one of them. "Y-ye I am wha-whats going on here? who are you" replied Frank. "you're under arrest for the suspicion of murdering Judith Hobbs, Sherry Hobbs, Emma Hobbs and Max Hobbs" shouted the detective. "T- this can't be tr... You mean... my family was murdered!?". Frank is now suddenly withdrawn into shock and starts to shake and sweat. "WHY WOULD YOU EVEN THINK THAT I MURDERED MY OWN FAMILY!?" roared Frank, "Is this a joke!?" The two homicide detectives try to take Frank into custody, but Frank restrains and breaks loose, he bails out of the building and runs on straight down the path to his left. “What am i doing, Frank thinks to himself, What the hell is happening”. Just as about Frank is about to reach the car park, he collapses onto the ground below and starts breathing heavily, he starts coughing and wheezing, he desperatley needs his inhaler. The last thing that Frank remembers before passing out was the detectives calling after him.
Frank then wakes up in a police station not knowing what the hell he’s doing there, as he tries to get his bearings the more overweight detective with the hoarse voice calls over to him. He told Frank that he and his partner were going to take him to the interrogation room where he would be interviwed. As the detectives and Frank walk casually over to the interrogation room, there are allot of thoughts running through Frank’s mind he’s primary thought being, his family is actaully dead and there never coming back. When the three men enter the room the tell Frank to sit down. It was a room that was far too small much to Frank’s discomfort. “First of all Mr Hobbs why did you run”, asks the younger detective with the bent out of shape face that looked quite ugly in Frank’s mind. There is a small moment of silence. Franks face starts trembling and struggles to get the words out of his mouth. “Because...replied Frank, I didn’t know what to do, I knew it was a stupid thing to do but there was alot going on in mind there... look all that I want you to know is that i didn’t kill my family!” The detective tells Frank that there were bullets found in the bodies of his family members. Frank stares at the detective and then stumbles to the floor and vomits, he can’t believe his ears. Why would anyone want to break into his house and shoot up his family?