Topic: Comeback Mistress.

It's not the same without ya. sad

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Yeah, we miss ya.
Maybe some freak kidnapped her.
Hope not or I'll send Freddy, Leatherface and Myers after him.

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Hellrat is right, we do miss her! sad   i miss her awesome pictures tongue

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Oh I've been busy, sharpening the horns, torturing and ripping the hearts out men..striking fear into the hearts of young children...... ya know somebody has to do it ..   big_smile     missed you guys ..

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^^^
Sounds like a lotta fun.

Cool to see you back. And I'm sure lots feel this way.

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MistressOf Horror wrote:

Oh I've been busy, sharpening the horns, torturing and ripping the hearts out men..striking fear into the hearts of young children...... ya know somebody has to do it ..   big_smile     missed you guys ..

yaaaayyyy! Ravishing Rachel is still around! we miss you beautiful one sad xx

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Long time, no see, Mis.  FYI, don't let all that pining you're doing for me keep you away.  You can pine all you want and still show up regularly. big_smile

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Woah! mistress and Wolfman are here!?
Have I just been missing your posts or something. I swear Wolfman you've been gone forever. So happy to see you both back!

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Yea,welcome back.
Hope you're going to stay for awhile. smile

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Vamp_Slayer wrote:

Woah! mistress and Wolfman are here!?

It's not a party until the MoH and Wo show up.  big_smile

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Vamp_Slayer wrote:

Woah! mistress and Wolfman are here!?
Have I just been missing your posts or something. I swear Wolfman you've been gone forever. So happy to see you both back!

i haven't been gone that long smile  do disappear for a little while as is my want these days, partly because i haven't been watching much horror lately but that's about to change again and two  when i feel i'm getting in a boring rut on here i like to give you guys and beauties a rest but i always come back because there are a lot of good people on here. thanks for your kindness Slayer! smile

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azathoth wrote:
Vamp_Slayer wrote:

Woah! mistress and Wolfman are here!?

It's not a party until the MoH and Wo show up.  big_smile

the cheque is bouncing your way in the post  Bryan smile

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aw Wolfy I miss you too.. and Lon I had to come back if  just to see that  Stuntman Mike Avatar ( you do realize that everyone reads your posts and hears Kurt Russell's voice in their head ) I couldn't go on any longer with out it ...  smile

Vamp Slayer !  hellrat !!   how are you all doing ??  I need to start coming back on a daily basis again smile

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Ive been dabbling in writing .. kicking out some short horror stories.  I will share one with you guys







She walked on the dirt road slowly, the dust clouds she created caked dirt all over her black sneakers. and the bottom of her polyester black pants. Tammy Lynn hated the shoes and hated the pants even more. Her uniform from 'Cluckys" the fried chicken grease pit she worked at. She continued on for another half mile , wishing she didn't live way out in the outskirts of town . Out in the middle of a half dead corn field. She continued on at the slow pace, taking her time. Even as the 100 degree weather baked her her brain, she would not hurry to reach the dirty little trailer sooner than she had to, Tammy Lynn refused to call it home. It was a prison , a cage , a place she dreaded returning to. Inside the trailer was the burden that would be chained to her for the rest of her life.

And it was probably awake right now too.


A little over a year ago , she remembered telling its father Jacob she was pregnant. He had a job at the slaughter house , had a decent truck, graduated last year and seemed to be good catch.

Dumb enough to believe he might be the daddy and do the honorable thing , but the boy wasn't that dumb . Truth is, Tammy Lynn didn't know who its father was. She had been to way too many parties , getting drunk and high . Winding up half-passed out and taking on anyone who gave her the least bit of attention. She couldn't remember most of those times too well , much less every guy she was with. Always being used by men and actually liking it too. But she thought Jacob was different, maybe he even cared about her a little . Made her think she might actually like to be a wife and mom . Turned out not only was she wrong about him caring about her , but he was cheap too. Wouldn't even help her pay for an abortion.

Tammy Lynn knew she was in trouble . Big trouble. pregnant with no daddy , no money.  That meant no fun, no boys, and no life.

Her Grams caught her one afternoon trying to shove a hanger up herself and stopped her before she could do any real damage.

After a 3 hour lecture and plenty of praying , Grams said she better go get a job and start learning how to do something besides spread her legs and get drunk.  Took her to church and made her pray for forgiveness. Tammy Lynn prayed alright, prayed harder than she ever had in her whole 17 years, but not for forgiveness, she prayed the thing that slithered and shifted around inside her would just die .





She arrived at the trailer. the screen door banged in the hot wind . Tammy Lynn took a cigarette out, went and sat in the lawn chair underneath the makeshift awning they had put up.  She opened the cooler next to the chair and looked inside. To her surprise , there was still half a six pack left ! " Bingo !" Tammy Lynn smiled and whispered softly. She didn't want her Grams to know she had got into her beer , but mostly she whispered because she didn't want it to hear she was home.  She opened the can as quietly as she could , which to her sounded like a firecracker going off.  She took a  long swig before her Grams could stop her .. Scolding her about drinking and breastfeeding, but truth was, she wasn't going to breast feed it anymore.  Tammy Lee  hugged her chest. It had been biting her too much.. It had teeth already ! Only 4 months and it had a few teeth ! Sharp ones too,. Her poor nipples had scabs all over them.. Too bad if they couldn't afford formula, " Let it die" she thought . 


She heard movement from inside the trailer,  " Damn it's awake already ? " Tammy sighed and got up. She took the last drink of beer and walked inside the dark trailer.  It stunk inside. Not just the normal odor of the old dank little trailer, but another scent on top of it..coming from the babies crib. It always had a weird smell . Ever since it was born . Right here in the trailer. Grams said she had helped plenty of midwives growing up and they couldn't afford a hospital anyways.

Not only did that thing smell , but something was wrong with it. Its legs were deformed , fused together, looking more like a dolphin tail than legs. Like some sort of hideous baby mermaid.  She thought it was disgusting. She tried not to touch it or hold it. She thought it knew it too somehow, the way it watched her from its crib. with the one eye that was slightly milky, then it would smile that stupid drooly smile and Tammy Lynn would kind of feel guilty . "It wasn't the baby's fault that it was born that way" her Grams would tell her with an accusing look.  She had caught her trying to give herself a douche full of bleach in her 7 month of pregnancy . Slapped her hard enough to make her teeth rattle too.


She heard a noise coming from the little bedroom.

"Grams? ... you in the bedroom ?"  ..

silence..  Then the sound of rustling of sheets , maybe something stirring on the bed.

She began walking towards the bedroom. Annoyed that Grams was taking a nap. while she slaved at a grease pit.


She passed the cluttered little kitchen area and saw an empty baby bottle with a little formula in it. Tammy Lynn knew she was in for it now. Grams must have figured out that she had quit breastfeeding and that it hadn't eaten in 2 days. That's why it had been crying so much. Tammy Lynn didnt care, she hope that 'thing' starved.

She stepped up to the bedroom door. The cheap door  was so thin she could hear it inside slurping on the bottle.

Tammy Lynn opened the door and saw her Grams sitting in her rocking chair . The window had a blanket over it , they'd hung it up over the blinds because  ever since it was born it didn't like bright lights too much. .

She was holding it feeding it a bottle , she shuddered at the thought of holding it and hoped Grams wouldn't make her.

The sounds it made drinking the bottle were almost enough to make her vomit. She was glad she had stopped breastfeeding.

"Grams, I'm sorry alright ? But I cant anymore. It hurts too much ..it has teeth and its been biting my nipples .... Grams.....? "

Tammy Lynn pulled the chain for the overhead ceiling fan light. She wished she hadn't.

It was sitting on  Grams chest . but it wasnt a bottle it was feeding on... It was Grams.

Her neck was torn out and it was biting on her flesh , biting pieces off and slurping it down..

It turned to look it her, a gleam of recogition, ( or was it a mutual disgust she saw ? ) Tammy Lynn couldn't scream , couldn't move. She back up and fell back against the bed and landed on the floor with a thump. She rose up on one elbow and looked over at her poor Grams . The shocked look in her dead eyes

It had crawled ( or slithered ) off Gram's lap . It was heading towards Tammy Lynn...

and she saw it had grown more teeth..


Lots more teeth.......



                                                           

the end

Re: Comeback Mistress.

I'm so glad my Mistress is back. I've needed some discipline for a while now.

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Nicely done, Mistress.  Dark, gruesome and long enough that we understand what's happening, but short enough that there are no lulls disrupting the suspense.  Sweet.

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Wow, amazing. A very good way to start my day this excellent story is. Thank you very much. smile

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is there no end to your talents, oh sexy one? xxx

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thanks guys .. you are too kind

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Great story Mistress!  What happens next?  smile

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^^  she feeds the baby  tongue

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haha...very creepy!

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Lots more teeth.......
great story!

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thanks swollen smile