Topic: Zombie Story I'm writing

I just recently continued to write a story I've been posting over at Horror-Movies sister site Movies Online. Movies Online: Mall Of The Dead is a horror/zombie tale about a group of survivors, based on people from the MO forums, who have escaped to a small mall in the fictional town of Folksdale, North Carolina. Obviously the story is paying some homage to Romero's classic Dawn Of The Dead, but the characters and events that occur are much different. Feel free if to check out what has been written and post some comments about what you think.