Topic: The Joke's on You!!

I'm in a current state where I am all things that emotion allows.
Sad, angry, hurt, lonely, tired but gracious in understanding we all feel this way. I'm not one good at expressing emotions to readily so I am going to say what is churning in my mind in the only way I know how and that'd be through a poem that is close to my heart.

Not written by another but written by my own hands and for the expressive purpose to let the emotions flow.
You needn't read it if you do not wish to but if you choose to I offer my loving thanks. And as a final thought,

Horror-Movies.ca & all its members ROCKS!!! tongue
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TITLE: (That whose name I cannot speak I shall) conceal

In darkened caves appears an aura of two light green eyes
Peering out into the flurry of forestry
So he can openly see
As if in utter surprise

The name I cannot say I shall conceal
The name I fear 'tis real

In evergladed mists
Waiting with awed silence
Is the blackened, snarling beast
Knowing war is due to commence

The name I cannot speak I will conceal
Despite the spite I so sorely feel

Sharp spears sink; dig into thy muddy ground
War is intermittently waged
Night is found
And deadly cries are shrilly enraged

The fight is messy and bloody
Many lives are inevitably lost
Yet among the profound anger to be heard
Through the pain we feel

That whose name I cannot speak I shall conceal
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There Endeth the Poem

Thanks for even reading this STRANGE, annoying poem tongue and for being such good friends along the way.

Love and blessings to y'all, BTK as stated in the title: the joke was on you! smile

With tender graces x

Last edited by BlackTequilaKiss (2009-03-10 17:22:48)

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You know, you say all the members here rock, you know I'm the rockiest.  There was nothing strange about that poem, but darkness is an area I'm comfortbale in.  Very nice poem, very well written.  Love ya much smile:):):)

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Interesting... I personally found it to be a bit wordy, but interesting.

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Joke ~ smoke I enjoyed the scenic poetry cool

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EasterBunnyKiller wrote:

Interesting... I personally found it to be a bit wordy, but interesting.

It was composed entirely of words and you found it a bit wordy?
What? you were expecting numbers? lol:lol::lol:

I liked it big_smile It spoke from ,what I presume, was the heart big_smile
You write nice BTK big_smile

with gracious tenderness wink tongue









ps. th3 p03m c0u1d hav3 u53d m0r3 numb3r5 lol:lol:

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LOL thanks Macho Mate! smile Glad it was liked and I respect EBK's point of view. But (and this is my opinion) it is not a literature great. This is just my heart writing. I was in the moment my hand working and my heart, sensibility didn't come into it. I wrote something that was deep and meaningful to me, don't care if it's not perfect as long as others can see where I am coming from.

But like I said thanks Macho smile appreciate the kind words big_smile

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BlackTequilaKiss wrote:

* This is just my heart writing. * big_smile

*= My trimmage
Maybe you should try using your hand???
I tried writing with my heart once, and damn , it hurt my chest.

Mind you, it was more legible than my handwriting normally is lol:lol::lol:

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lol @ Macho, well thankfully in my case it was only in theory! tongue But thanks Macho old bud big_smile

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Zero problematico old bean big_smile

And now for a serious comment.

Never stand on a hairbrush when barefoot, it really hurts.

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Serious comment this way too then: smile

Never stand on a pin, that REALLY hurts!! tongue

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Seriously serious comment.
Never stand on a primed beartrap that REALLY hurts