Topic: "Eat"

Screams away me,
from a goodnight's rest.
Sheltered beneath my sheets.
Body covered in cold sweat,
I sense my madness and it eats.

A shadow sits aside my bed.
Legs crossed and hands together.
His faceless grin and eyes of red,
signs my sanity wont last forever.

My eyes gaze,
throughout my room.
Words mumbling with no understand.
A torture future,
I now presume.
I'll take a victim with merciless hand.

Years I ignored this little bubble.
But knew it grew withing my pit.
Hoped it would leave with no trouble,
too late now for here it sits.

"I know you."
I tell the shadow.
"I'm not surprised of your presence.
Youve been with me since my cradle,
the reason for my life unpleasent.

Evil thoughts you gave my head.
I pushed away from my mind.
A few selected you wanted dead.
I resisted so many times.

So many thoughts of hell's fire and heat.
For all the lives I will take.
Slowly my conscience this shadow did eat,
and left my mind in a sinful state.

"You think it's wise that you are here,
in the preasence of my home?
I'll take the lives! I have no fear!
First I'll end your's, by ending my own!"

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Cool poem big_smile

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Great poem! I really liked it.
Especially the "years I ignored this little bubble..." part. smile

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Strange for a first post? Wonder if its spam.

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Could be.. But it's nice anyway.

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Whomever this might be, it is an original first post and macabre. Very sharp and nice smile

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I doubt it's spam, just someone trying to share their work, which is awesome because the poem is very well written

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i did not have the patience to go past the first 2 lines

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It's very dark and very good.

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Awesome poem.  I hope this isn't the poster's suicide note though.  That would be sad sad

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Why won't the writer answer to these posts? Once again, the poem is great.

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Lol BuMp

It's now become an intriguing mystery.