Topic: Animal - short story #4

I just finished this, so it's hot off the presses, as they say. Of course, that also means I haven't had a chance to read over it yet, so it's still kinda rough around the edges, but, sometimes, having other people read things over is more helpful, so...here she is.
It was inspired by a dream I had the other night. I call it... *cue the creepy Shutter Island-esque score* ...ANIMAL. Tell me what you think smile  as always, any comment/criticism at all is appreciated.

http://www.scribd.com/doc/30074283/Animal

Re: Animal - short story #4

excellent chrizzy! got my attention from the start and held it, and that's all you can ask, well done! smile

Re: Animal - short story #4

Well, I'm always happy to get...um...one response lol
Merci cool

Re: Animal - short story #4

Dude, that's awesome! big_smile

Very well written my friend. Very entertaining and suspensful too. Really liked it. You should write a novel if you haven't already.

Re: Animal - short story #4

I thought it was great.