Topic: Apocalypse on aisle six.
I have two parts done now of this zombie story. What do ya think?
- wolfman1959
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visual as usual Swellie, and pretty good! you've not bored me yet!
- swollenguy
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Thanks Wolfman, truly appreciated!
- MistressOf Horror
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I read Part 2.... a great read.. I cant wait for more !!!
- swollenguy
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In case no one knows what a carpet kicker looks like
Relevant to the story
- MistressOf Horror
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OOOOOH ! Installment 3 ? Im goign there now to read
p.s. actually I do know what a carpet kicker looks like. my ex husband used to install flooring 
but nice of you to put a visual there for people who dont
- MistressOf Horror
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just read it !!! its getting REALLY good Swollen
- MistressOf Horror
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hurry up with the next installment... between your story and the Walking Dead series , im in suspense !!!! 
- ChainSaW80
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I just read all 4 parts and all I can say is....wow....where the fuck is the rest man? Your ass better be writting, right now! I'm so blasted mad right now
Just kidding...kinda. Amazing stuff man!
- MistressOf Horror
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you are really talented..
but yeah, HURRY UP and give us another installment
- swollenguy
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Ok, now we’re past the set up and into the splatter.
http://theswollencorpse.blogspot.com/20 … art-5.html
Creature, self proclaimed zombie lover what do you think?
Last edited by swollenguy (2010-12-02 01:06:49)
- MistressOf Horror
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NICE addition , LOTS of gore..
Mistress is pleased 
Last edited by MistressOf Horror (2010-12-01 23:51:53)
- ChainSaW80
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Pretty damn good, I wanna offer you some advice but you seem to have everything down pat. Great story so far, can't wait to read more
- MistressOf Horror
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this is an awesome story !!
- swollenguy
- Hider of Spam
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What did you think of me combining in the story fast/running and slow zombies with the whole new-dead old-dead thing?
Last edited by swollenguy (2010-12-03 15:54:00)
- MistressOf Horror
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I did like how you changed it up.. was quite surprising. they should try that in a zombie movie..
- Gardenofstone10
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Just read 'em, very awesome. The first line was enough to hook me!!
- swollenguy
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- swollenguy
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- MistressOf Horror
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Im loving this story Swollen !!!! well done !!
- swollenguy
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Thanks. Next one should be the end.
- MistressOf Horror
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this was a really enjoyable read.. cant wait for the next installment
- D.Darko
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Wow awesome! Just read all of them. I love how you explain reasons for things i.e. fast and slow zombies being new and old dead, the previous zombie outbreak. So good it cuts out the boringness of characters not believing in zombies and having to get their heads round. It's really clever stuff because you give perfect reasoning and explanation without droning on about it. You have a real talent. Keep up the great work. :):)