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Caught up today...good stuff. I like the Heather charater so far and all the others. Excited to see how it all ends up!
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agreed..I like the Heather character also
- swollenguy
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Here’s the conclusion I hope everyone likes it.
- deadhorse13
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hope everyone likes it?
Don't give them an option!
you really a need a press agent. LOL
Last edited by deadhorse13 (2011-01-21 00:38:00)
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Holy Shit !!! this is REALLY Good !!!! I mean , you should be writing novels and screenplays !!! wow !!
- deadhorse13
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saw that very last bit coming, I swear LOL
good read, swollen -
I like how the story developed and the way it was paced
not ever lingering on anything unnecessary.
I'd make minor edits were the entire thing 'go to press', but I think it's a fine example of your creative writing skills. Definitely have some talent, my friend.
Look forward to more of your stuff. 
- swollenguy
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Thanks you two!
- wolfman1959
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Swellie, the ending was a bit rushed and you went for a happy ending but i always enjoy your stuff and you definitely have a talent, and as i'm always saying your writing is so visual. you are good.
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wolfman1959 wrote:
Swellie, the ending was a bit rushed and you went for a happy ending but i always enjoy your stuff and you definitely have a talent, and as i'm always saying your writing is so visual. you are good.
Thanks Wolfman
You’re the last person on the planet I thought wouldn’t appreciate a “happy ending” 
- wolfman1959
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swollenguy wrote:
wolfman1959 wrote:Swellie, the ending was a bit rushed and you went for a happy ending but i always enjoy your stuff and you definitely have a talent, and as i'm always saying your writing is so visual. you are good.
Thanks Wolfman
You’re the last person on the planet I thought wouldn’t appreciate a “happy ending”
now now ! you're not like this when we're picking daisies together. so i'm a miserable old furbag, i can't help it 
- deadhorse13
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picking daises is slang for all the gay sex, yes? yes.
- swollenguy
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wolfman1959 wrote:
now now ! you're not like this when we're picking daisies together. so i'm a miserable old furbag, i can't help it
It’s something to see, we don’t use our hands!
- deadhorse13
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i rest my case LOL
- swollenguy
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deadhorse13 wrote:
picking daises is slang for all the gay sex, yes? yes.
Maybe want to pick some daises with me and the wolf
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maybe if I ever get bored with my petunias LOL
- swollenguy
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No Tulips Joke?
- deadhorse13
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your tulips can kiss my ass
heh. get it?
drive through, please LOL
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deadhorse13 wrote:
picking daises is slang for all the gay sex, yes? yes.
what gay sex? i told you i'm a miserable old furbag!:/
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ok miserable sex then
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swollenguy wrote:
ok miserable sex then
it would be with you ! 
we're both firing on all cylinders tonight Swellie old boy!
Last edited by wolfman1959 (2011-01-21 18:21:12)
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swollenguy wrote:
ok miserable sex then
- swollenguy
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ever have prison pizza?
- MistressOf Horror
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Im sure somebody likes prison pizza.. but I think its just the delivery guy who likes it
- deadhorse13
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extra sausage, I assume?
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Very good Swollen, i really enjoyed it!