OK. I liked the sepia tone filming.
The zombies reminded me of drunk frat boys in college moreso than zombies. Pasty faces with eye black and sweatpants a zombie do not make. The hammer FX was pretty good. I'm not sure about the cemetery scene- I can't decide if it's an homage or rip-off.
My 2 biggest complaints:
1.5 minutes of credits at the beginning of a 5 minute vid. I watched them out of respect.
The damn music was the worst part. Shambling 'zombies' + thrashing music = cognitive dissonance. Plus it wasn't very good music (but that is subjective).
I give you credit for putting these vids together, I can barely do a video movie review.
My advice, if you want it-
If you keep the music, make your zombies fast. If you keep the shambling zombies, go to more atmospheric music. Try some new tricks for the zombie makeup.
There you go.