Topic: Pauperized (First attempt at this)

This is my first attempt at creating anything like this. I've been looking to get someone to critique it and give me some suggestions. Thanks for taking the time to watch.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4UEvENmN … dSmYiJZA6-

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Interesting

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Not a fan of the electronicy music.  Visual were nice, good transistions, would have skipped the "screen scanning shifting" at the end.

Also, add a monkey, but I say that to everyone, so...

Pretty cool.   I would have ended up in the rapids and drowned.  Really, the biggest thing is if you changed the synthesizer for an actual piano in the music, it would add a layer of creep to it.

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Thanks.. The music was made before the video. It was originally a music video for the track but it seems now like just an experimental in which the music was created for. I was also unsure of the bad tv effect at the end but I just wanted to up the creepy vibe to the video.

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^^
Got ya on the music.  The only reason I brought up the TV effect is that there are not to many tube TVs laying around.  (Kinda sad, it's amazing what you can do to a tube TV with some magnets and cheap electronics)

Like these guys
http://i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2010/10/17/article-1321309-0BA6F0FE000005DC-63_634x382.jpg

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You must really like monkeys... lol

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^^^ Especially if it's cold out.  But  I've already said too much...