Before you read my comment, you may want to know that I'm an honest and harsh critic. I've slapped around a few of my buddies on HM when I think they've made mistakes. This is just my opinion, so take it or leave it as you see fit.
**Review**
Considering that the official record for no sleep was 11 days (some have claimed 14), and "On the fourth day he had a delusion that he was Paul Lowe winning the Rose Bowl, and that a street sign was a person," there is no way someone is going 187 days without sleep. Even is you were snorting coke and doing whatever you do with meth 24/7, you'd die first.
Without a logical reason for him staying awake that long (c'mon, a baby? Go sleep in a hotel for a few days), I can't get behind this. Maybe if he was cursed or something.
3/10
**End Review**
That being said, congratulations on completing your film! It's not easy and takes a lot of determination. Keep working the craft and continue to improve your skills. I wish the best for your future projects.
Last edited by azathoth (2013-01-16 08:51:55)