A short supernatural-intended/horror story written in school.

So during the French class we were studying about fantasy litterature, which is filled with stuffs like Dracula (1992), Frankenstein (1994), Brad Pitt and Tom Cruise Vampire guys (1994) and lots of other sh*ts!
So the teacher said that we must invent a fantastic type short story and complete it... in 2 hours. She applauded me for the story and writing but complains about how nearly off-topic, gory and disturbing it is.
So I don't like stuffs that don't have any frightening description or gore in it, so I just try to write a supernatural horror story. (The order is to write something supernatural surrounding the main character(s) from the POV of the main character.)

So here it is, 40 lines A4, translated easely from French to English by me (it has some horror parodies in it and sorry if the translation is weird.):

"The story which you're about to read, was told by my point-of-view. In Clearance (Christine)'s Apartment Renting, where resides my family and me:

- Damien (The Omen Trilogy) Cunnigham (Christine): 14 years-old, a 9th grader.
- My cute little 8 year-old sister Carol-Anne (Poltergeist).
- My parents: Nathan (name of one of my sister's friend) and Sophie (the name of my crush).

The event which happenned inside our apartment might be the most shocking and most frightening thing I ever met:

Everything starts at around 7:00 P.M., when we were having diner as usual, Carol-Anne do what she does at table everytime: Playing with her food.
While my parents eat slides of eggplants. My mom was telling me to eat eggplants, but I don't like eggplants, I despise them, so I just ignore momma's words and dig in to my steak because in about twenty seconds she will stop anyway, and she did.
After a moment of total silent (well, there's the sound of us eating and my little sister playing with her food.) the bowls, ustensils, pots and etc... starts to flow in the horizon.
Me and my parents, shocked, shaken and above all, completely frightened by the happening in the the room, all stand away from the table except for Carol-Anne who, observe with a worshiping look at the massive pile of "gore" formed by foods we were eating that you can only see in either Sam Raimi or Peter Jackson's movies.
It was incredible! All the dangerous ustensils hovering all around the air! Mom and Dad tried to avoid the "storm of foods" but unfortunately, a steak knife throw itself directly and penetrate through my mom's eyes, sending her head violently on to the boiling soup pot which, jumped "at the speed of light", to my dad's face, obvioubsly destroying his skull and caused an explosion, a rain, a shower of blood into the still shocked-faced Carol-Anne and my face while I scream for The God.
I ran to my little sister and grab her to run for the fornt door and told her to run, she walks slowly outside of the apartment, still with the haunting look on her face. Seeing that Carol-Anne is now safe, I turn back to observe the so called "kitchen-carnage", to observe the terrifying scenery in the dining room:
A dozen of uniquely shaped shadows seemingly "look" at me, surrounding the pile of foods and the corpses of my Mom and Dad. I hear them! I hear them! I hear them saying:

"Join Us! Join Us! Join Us!"

I hurriedly answer to the voices of The Shadows;

"No! No! No! No! No! No! And NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

and ran to the front door to finally get out of that F*CKING APARTMENT!"

That's it, I hope you enjoy reading it. I'm only an 8th graders so my vocabulary ain't much. Also I'm Vietnamese so

Last edited by A Lost Boy (2012-11-09 10:09:00)