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Re: Poetic Corner (for the Artist in us)
I love it, Renee, keep up the good work. So much pain makes for beautiful art
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Scabs & Flowers ~~~~~~~~~~~ Flower unfolds in skin Sick fragrences, however subtle Yellow and rotten Alive and deadly Quick to devour ~~~ Reeking of sin Hurting and bruised the root a vein Fully conscious & waiting patiently Repulsive to the true self but alluring to the inexperienced and unwise It brings forth a temptation and a sickness Now let me touch.. ~~~ The scab awakens Agitated Sheds yellow shavings like foul leaves not of the Earth Blood is all over my hands ~~~ In my hurried, red reflection I catch the mirror of guilt Innocense is lost & I feel ashamed the gods frown down I worry as Hell awaits Morality in question, disease of adolesence The flower devours Beauty is carded & devoided ~~~~ Skin flower secretes black liquid Makes me intoxicated inside a death realm It paralyzes its self with centuries-old discipline Waits for a shy and unsure prey Takes him from the crowd only to punish him The child does not survive. Tombstones, knives, cries and candles Sacred Skin-flower smiles in the dirt Earth-Worms scream ~~ A cocky arrogance of sudden inspiration arises Anger succeeds me I have gained the knowledge of my power and I eat the skin-flower. ~~~ The vision frighteing, but the fear gone Shamans had sung the right song Incaro of dreams, the light I have seen They call it 'Scab & flower'.
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Wow...so many poets among us. I'm not the main lyricist in my group but here's one I wrote called Light another Match. Your killer greets you with a smile A cold handshake and blank eyes In the Stone hallways of a high-rise That stretch out for half a mile Unconsciousness sets in Hot coffee and Aspirin¸ Red/green devils, Oxycontin Keep us Normal for a while Where did we go wrong? We threw the fuel in the fire What do we do now? Light another match And with that spark, the White knight is dispatched Up from a damp stone chamber To face the Siren-dragon and tame her To Save the Queen’s peasants from Danger To keep his soldiers well bandaged and patched But he can’t win alone His wounds scrape the bone His back’s against stone And what’s worse, no one’s shown The slightest care for tomorrow Where did I go wrong? I threw the fuel in the fire What do I do now? Light another match More on the task at hand; Morons with elastic bands on their wrists Singing the same song to new half-wits Telling old lies with a new twist Did you think the weak’d use their FIST? What side will you be on for the last stand? Another day, another dollar Drenched in sweat up to your collar Some men spit, some women holler The walls around you getting smaller Five more minutes, then YOU call her You feel like the egg that never hatched Where did you go wrong? You threw the fuel in the fire What do you do now?
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Dear Stranger, I see you look at me with searching eyes, My scars, you think, tell you all you need to know About me, about my life But they aren’t, they don’t tell you half my story. They don’t tell you my favorite color is blue or that my favorite animal is a penguin Please understand these lines aren’t there to tell you who I am, my favorite song Or that I write music lyrics in margins They tell you I struggle and I hurt but they don’t tell you im a writer or love to sing I’m sure you don’t mean anything by it But believe me when I say They won’t tell you how when I love I do so with my whole heart or that I love sunsets more than the sun rise I can feel your pity, sorrow and curiosity and it cuts deeper than the blade I took to my wrist So don’t ask your questions Don’t believe the lies Don’t try to read between my white lines
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An Ode To Merrick ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I stand here before this gross sea of specters Right amongst the mad dog faces, the hump backs, & the most miniture of human beings. Fat mouths gape, pupils widen The faces dent in like melting plasticine Suits wrinkle and become puddles of cloth The grey clouds of a peculiar melancholy gather Rains of guilt crash down My tears blend in. I only wish I were the circus clown. The sea of unblinking eyes and stupified minds disappear behind the closed curtain. Phase into Act III. My sensory organs are clogged with pitty & desperation I live the life of a poet without a language, Or a killer without the means. I am the child scraping his dead dog off the side of a road I'm the weeping mother embracing her suffocated infant. I was born the son of a godess But I, I am not of that beauty. I am inhuman, I am indifferent. I am a Creature. The fingers that point in the presence of my doom The smoke rings that encircle my fate The cries that confirm my hiddeous countenance I raise my blocky hands into the sky and I pray For a savior or a quick death. Release me from these chains, from this cold whip From the spectators of death, & this absurd playground of freak theature The knees weak, they crumble The head too heavy, it drops to my chest Be me father, my consolation, or so be it my crucifixion. As my confession states, You've all been decieved by a moniker of illusion I am not an elephant man I am not indifferent I am a human being, My name is Joseph Merrick! I am a human being. The stubby faces of cruelty look upwards and onwards Their mouths of fear morph into a body of suicide laughter Top hats spin, canes drop, eyes shrink back into bleak sockets They point the fingers at themselves. They shreik at the repugnancy of their own shattered images Egos exposed, their souls too far away for reconciliation This life force is a conscious, rampant disease And it is not me. Specters of fear jump ship Become slaves and choose the whip. Alcohol gargles within livers, & blood begins to boil. Their green lizard insides smell like a collection dead, unloved animals Backs twist, lips curve, heads inflate, feet bend backwards. These are the true freaks. These are the elephant men. But I, I am a human being. & my name is Joseph Merrick
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Happy Family? ••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Daddy came home he was drunk Mommy was with her sweet loverboy Dad was high but he could still hear Climbed the stairs and he opened the door Saw his trustful ten years with wife 'Cause daddy Daddy was God Damn crazy Took the gun Pointed it to mommy's head The sweet loverboy Couldn't give her a hand Couldn't give her a hand 'Cause daddy Daddy was God Damn crazy He shot and shot again He blew their heads No one was left There was blood all over He shot himself 'Cause daddy Daddy was God Damn crazy Crazy Crazy Crazy Crazy Crazy Crazy Crazy God Damn Crazy •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Yeah I find killing and blood poetic. I'm a madman, I know that...
Last edited by kXnPunk (2012-12-28 10:24:10)
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^ Hehehe, I like that, kXnPunk, it sounds like it would make a great punk song!
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^^^ Well it is. Not really Punk, more Underground but very depressing Joy Division style. Here it is. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KKlCv1NiEpw
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That's right on, Punk. Is that you playing/singing (as I thought the lyrics were one of your own)? Oh, and I am subbed to you on YouTube, by the way. 
Last edited by The Creature (2012-12-28 13:21:52)
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^^^ lol yeah I saw that, want to sub you too but with the new You Tube lotsa stuff isn't working anymore. Grumble. But yeah I play bass and sing. 
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kXnPunk wrote:^^^ lol yeah I saw that, want to sub you too but with the new You Tube lotsa stuff isn't working anymore. Grumble. But yeah I play bass and sing. 
Cool beans, Punk. I'll have to check out a couple more of the tracks you have posted on your channel, you've got me curious now.
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Check Home Made, my old Punk/Hardcore band and Flibuste Lunaire the new stuff I do. Rest isn't music from me. Glad it fot you curious mate, curiosity is one of my favorite sins with lust.  I know it's not a sin, a default rather but whatever.
Last edited by kXnPunk (2012-12-29 01:02:42)
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Song lyrics from 1997 Band name was Home Made Champs De Rêves [Fields Of Dreams] I see and open myself Those are the emotions I discover In my music, some images And at back some colors I discover them and I get emotions And those images come from my thoughts In my fields of dreams I see myself In my fields of dreams I discover myself I see myself sad I'm happy I can't see clear in my darkness and my lightness May them be confused or clear Those are the emotions of my heart I see myself sad I'm happy I can't see clear in my darkness and my lightness May them be confused or clear Those are the emotions of my heart of my heart of my heart of my heart of my heart... -------------------------------------------------------- Empty Place Walking, walking in an empty place Feeling I'm all alone I'm lost in images I'm lost and all aloooooooone Memories are blinding me there's nothing else around Is there a way out Is there some way out Is there some way out Is there a way out Is there a way out Memories, memories, memories............................. It's dark and cold My bones are shaking Then suddenly Woah A warm flame comes Like a dream inside this place Like a candle in a lightless spot Like a flash light straight on my face Like your breath on my neck Oooooohhh
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Roses are red Violets are blue I'm schizophrenic And so am I
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So true. But so are they rather than I am, you're schizophrenic. 
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Wrote this after more kids murders last year. Still working up the music though. Gonna be a slow song. I think it makes more sense than a fast happy beat one. INTOLERABLE ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••• Children eyes full of fear Dark and without light Pierce my heart It's cruel you hear Why should they suffer from this intolerable cruelty What did they do to be victims Of this intolerable, intolerable, intolerable violence I'd like to see a sunlight ray Make their pupils shine But it's up to us All of us Why should they suffer from this intolerable cruelty What did they do to be victims Of this intolerable, intolerable, intolerable violence Kidnapings, murders, rape, abandonments, violent fights Gimme the reason I'll include it in this song But that won't solve the question Noooooooooooooo Why should they suffer from this intolerable cruelty What did they do to be victims Of this intolerable, intolerable, intolerable violence We must save them from these tortures And punish those who hurt them To see back on their face A simple and beautiful smile. •••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••
Last edited by kXnPunk (2013-01-05 02:29:42)

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^^ I was going to write something silly and funny. I'll save it for another day, because I won't impede on the quality you wrote.
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^^^ I defy you to do so.  But wow, quality you wrote, thanks!!! I like that. Makes my day. 
Last edited by kXnPunk (2013-01-05 10:11:05)
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It's 3 o'clock and they come back home. Of course... They've been around since midnight and 3 hours is enough. To splatter sleeping city tax payers with Evilness. And home is everywhere. They are flying so fast that I better be well aware. Senses working to their fullest. No use trying to hide. Prepare for what's coming. Mind is fully smoking. And a frightening laugh is blasted out in the silent night. In which smoky clouds drag you away from reality if they may. And the pain just make you pray to what entity you cannot say. It's time to save the day, gotta wait 'til darkness goes away. Hey. Stop fear, you have to input in your mnd but your heart just have to say, bim boom bim boom faster until later, when the creatures run out of here. So no nothing to fear. The frightening laugh I can still hear...
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In life, we all have troubles And sometimes we need a friendly smile And someone that understands Or even just listen, for a while. Some have family Some have friends Or perhaps there are gaps That need amends. Doesn't really matter If it's one person or two What is important Is that they are true. If you feel alone With no other choice Just remember here There are those that will hear your voice.

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azathoth wrote:In life, we all have troubles And sometimes we need a friendly smile And someone that understands Or even just listen, for a while. Some have family Some have friends Or perhaps there are gaps That need amends. Doesn't really matter If it's one person or two What is important Is that they are true. If you feel alone With no other choice Just remember here There are those that will hear your voice.
stands up and claps! very good Bryan  errr..... just came back to check i wrote claps ...... yeah! ok....
Last edited by wolfman1959 (2013-01-12 04:59:10)
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Thanks guys. Sometimes an idea pops into my head. Then I go to sleep for 13.4 months, .
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A tears falls slowly on the side of my face. Beautiful. Thank you. I put my knee down in front of you my friend.
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