Nice, man. Interesting how you turned that song into a story. It was short, yet while I knew which song you were writing from early on, I honestly didn't see the little twist at the end coming. To wit:
I thought the guy was being lead to his death, the twist being that he's already dead.
Oh, and the song is an old favorite -- Dead Man's Party, by Oingo Boingo.
Nicely done, sir.