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They say looks could kill, I be that Ashton Kutcher
Yeah I'll slaughter you, like a fucking butcher
Not the same person when I look in the mirror
She's not the same girl when I look at her
Shell of our former selves
Collecting dust on all these shelves
No place in society
Only person I have is me
Smoke that herb, not talking herbal tea
I'm in ir for the long haul
Long lasting serenity
Taking bullets to the chest
Take one for the fucking team
Don't play nice with others, call me methamphetamine

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That would be PERFECT for some Stoner Rock Band's lyrics. big_smile

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It was a rap, my friend.  But I could see that working too. big_smile

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Madness comes in many shapes and forms
From a knife, gun, tank, grenade and sword
Nothing but lust, a craving for war
Just pray every night, no answer from the fucking Lord
All you have is your self, with your soul to sell
As the war rages, the fires burning harder in hell
Blood on my hand, feet covered in sand
Drop to down my knees, as I float to the sea
I make out of this world, in a blaze of glory

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Damn my rap got cut off, it's edited.

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A rap.

The world won't stop spinning
This is just my beginning
To rise up from above, from the dirt, cement, all these fucking rugs
Redeeming myself from my former sins
Watch them all blow away in the wind
Just rise up from my grave
No longer will I be Deaths slave
Live life on my own terms
Live with these emotional burns
My life, dull just like a knife
They say it's what you make it
But in the end it just rapes us

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@Tri - I like that your raps have such substance, as opposed to some of the superficial "artists" out there who rap about their ego's content with bling and bitches and whatever.
Here's another song/poem I finished up about a half hour ago.

The Final Meeting

My eyes are red and my ears are burning,
strange signals run through my head.
My heart is yearning, I still feel the corkscrew turning
over all the little things she did and said.

Black holes are out there, deep in space
and I can feel 'em stretching out my brain.
The road is rumbling in my chest & I wonder
if all them women really think me so untame.
Just crawling out of the next grave pocket, I know
it'll never again quite feel the same.

Just touch me one more time, honey baby
knock me straight off of my chair.
You know just what it's like to transcend time,
don't ya darlin'? Even when I haven't gotten there...
I can still smell those sick daisies burning,
straight from your kitchen table and into the air.

Cigarette burns on my fingers,
there's snakes in your hair.
Your red lips chapped & scarred & thick,
but just like always they
never fail to stick.

Somewhere out there, I know the roar of the world
could never match the roar inside here.
Our savior has come too late, it's just our fate
and it's neither here nor there.

Clouds form upon the ceiling,
and I'm feeling angry like a clown.
Life was supposed to take us up,
not drop us straight down,
but here we are...
and I wish we could act as if we didn't care.
Ahh, but our eyes
feel just like weapons when we stare.

This is our final meeting,
we'll care not for friendly greeting.
Let's just get straight to the point,
it was always meant to be fleeting.

Our conversation burns hot
and limps from line to line.
My head is a smoking barrel
and I think she thinks that's fine.
I put on my Nixon mask...
she just smiles sly and I never say goodbye.

Thus life in its ways will go on beatin'
with the pulse of my scalloped heart
and the cruel hands of her time.
We can still sense our wicked vibrations
rolling on through this dusty insect city,
rolling through our strained relations & our greatest lies
rolling on through this insane parade of flesh and crime.

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Dreams Upon the Interlude

Ghosts of the night-time
play funny with ghosts of the day.
Walking with their feet between the floor,
they sway back and forth,
rattling their chains that will never break.

The rooster crows
with an eye's blink at dawn.
A clown hides his nose,
and the world carries on
without any consideration of his name.

Time for you will weave on
like a spider with its thread.
Tangled up in its own web,
it's just a victim of its own chase
lost in a blurr of completely temporary space.

Down at the water's edge
the tide will keep you good company.
And as all the clouds will go by
far above the sound of your crys,
it'll already be the end of the day.

The crystals won't work
and the star maps will lie.
God is a mole,
prayers can't dig you out of that hole,
and it surely won't save the human race.

Anger does come
in a viscious red run.
Just throw salt on the wound
and your blister 'neath the solemn moon
will make you swoon to the grace of day.

And that rushing river will flow
in tune to the eternal I -Don't-Know
as butterflys land on your face.
And if you can't think of that,
just throw your brain in a vat
and forget all the words I'll ever say.

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My rap.

Instead of chasing dreams, they started chasing me
Fall asleep in the coffee shop, high of caffeine, can't buy no pot
Keep looking left and right, my heart keeps pumping madness
These drums bang, these beats they make a marriage
Can't tame the beast, no restraining order from the Reaper
Nothing keeps us together, no piece of paper
Demon on my back breathing
Won't leave me til Hell's freezing
@e're all nothing but enemies
Slicing heads, torturing feds, bombs overseas
No burning bridges, the lights won't stop flicking
The egos grow bigger, the money hungry start to Snicker
Not talking bout the candy, lifes not sweet and dandy
Can't decipher fiction from reality
We all live behind a smoke screen

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Very cool one. Now come on, do a song with it and put it on You Tube for us to enjoy. Come on, go, go, go, you can do it bro. lol

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Innumerable, Inconceivable

Infinite in all respects lay the mind,
as a vastly unexplored frontier of dreams for dreamers,
whose reality is produced by complete electro-chemical order.
How can we not salivate in dumb-struck wonder
within its rushing, nightless, dayless symmetry?
For it all stretches into eternity with microscopic ease;
all of it in the billions, billions, innumerable and inconceivable,
in full cosmologic stride.

Only barely are these things grasped in shaken awe,
in confounding wonder, in the realization of Self, realizing Self.
We sense it all unfold, expand, & spiral deep and deeper
into unknowing oceans of which we have little clues;
all flowing into but the thinnest streams of total awareness,
into but trickles of external action.

And what dictates my course of action?
What is it that shades those deepest extremes of my heart?
Perhaps it is that which tempts & withholds the impulse of a fist,
a knife in a stranger's hand, a club at the side of our closest brother,
or a joker on the avenue of Sin in Paradise.
These gross calculations of void and non-void,
of knowledge and mystery,
distinguishes where our true freedom lies,
removed of smoke, unhindered.

This eternal canyon stretches down well into oblivion.
We feel the undeniable urge to jump,
just as we feel the intention to contentedly sit.
Freedom as it lies, squelches in a hot burn
between those thin red lines of Will;
Where we struggle restless through the years
in a high summer fever, heat-bed rage.
Thus is the pain of our life as we Will it,
coiled within the depths of bottomless brains.

It is true that nothing blinds soul in its totality
except thine own eyes.
They are like daggers, sharp, and looking for suspects,
to de-construct, and analyze
beyond any comprehension, or awareness.

The hairs on my head are severed suddenly from its follicles,
as I grope and fondle the vastness of Mind, untied of all ties.
But here we are, as dreamers of the one dream, totally lost
amidst an overwhelming ocean of conscious units swarming
in the billions and billions, in the innumerable and inconceivable.

All of it merely floats harmless as a dust mode.
We are sunken on a tiny, blue ship in an infinite sea of space & time,
where the sun-split dawn exists as but one moment
forever in uniformity, and in all ways.

And I ask,
why should we not all be inspired
to a sudden, incredible speechlessness,
within this one moment, forever in uniformity, and in always?

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Wowowowowowowowowowow WAHOO!!! Amazing.

Man you're a talented motherfucker. big_smile

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lol Well thanks, dude!

I'm glad that you can dig, nonetheless actually put in the time to read my shit. haha

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Ya man, it's PURE ENTERTAINMENT!!! big_smile